Arkusar
So far love tue story. Not many chrafting stories out there with a not so op mc but yet strong enough. Would like to meet more people on his journey even if these arent long term characters to add more flavor. Minor grammar mistakes but very readable. World back ground is still developing in a slow but steady way. Dont care for all the aide story but it does help with world building im sure hope for more keep it up
This story is really fun to read. If you don't like systems, I understand, but this one isn't like most. It's important to remember certain things, but usually, once they're mentioned, you don't need to. They will just show up again later. The author did a great job of not drawing out chapters with blacksmith terminology that no one would understand or have fun reading. The only problem I have with the book is people who comment on spelling mistakes that I didn't notice until they pointed it out. The chapters are ALL FREE! Why are you complaining?!?!?!?! All in all, the characters are great, the story is interesting, and the system is likable in that it doesn't appear in text that much. Give it a read.
The world and characters are both very interesting and the author handles many different characters and their devlopment quite well. Overall a good mix of character interaction/development, crafting, and action, all set in a really interesting setting. (Also thank you author-kun for not having a harem, truely a blessing)
one of the best system based novels I have read so far. it keeps you interested in the character and his companions without suffocating you in typical protag bs. Has a good stable development of the world and overal development. My only small nitpick is the spelling mistakes sometimes but is easily overlooked.
My review is more based towards some small flaws here and there but more or less the book is a great find! As a fellow author this has opened my eyes a bit to things I need to work on in my own books. The twists and turns pull you in while the combat and growth are undeniable. The only thing I have to complain about is the slow growth rate of the Mc. But I am not the author and have no doubt they have plans for them.
Honestly this should be a bestseller you would pick up at a bookstore. Of all books ive read on this site and others this is the only one i havent lost interest in. my only complaint is that the chapters seem short to me and i have to read them one update at a time. Its still easily a 5 out of 5 in my opinions.
not often i get to give a good review. the writing is fluid, well written and has proper grammar, syntax, etc. i would enjoy a few more literary tools and techniques in the writing, but overall, it's a solid 8/10 and worth the read. the story has started to slow down and plod a little in the 150th chapter or so, but the premise is interesting, the world is well developed, and the character, crafting process, etc, all is great.
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