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ohhhh i like this one, yep, this book is great! From the plot to the story, you know how to get a reader going! I love the main character and I will be rooting for whatever happens next. The way you described everything was really interesting- And i hope u keep on writing like this becuz count me as a fan!
I love the emphasis on the moral character of the people in the world, it adds a lot to both the world background and the character development! The only issue is some of the grammatical issues, but seeing as the author is new, hopeful as they develop their skills, these mistakes will be checked and corrected in the future! Check the novel out if you're looking for a novel set in the harsh cultivation world. <3
This is my first cultivation book notwithstanding the author has managed to get me hooked. Honestly, the description of the setting of the book is pretty commendable. That said, I think the author can still improve the book if he were to work on the flow of the story and make the readers feel more of the emotions of the characters so as not to make them seem flat. The author can also work a little more on the grammar. All in all, nice work Author, keep up the good work!❤🌹☺🤗
I'm appreciative of the fact that the author adds a small guideline in the beginning for anyone unfamiliar in the wuxia genre. There's some grammatical mistakes and consider me a grammar nazi, but it kinda spoiled the reading for me.So I sincerely suggest to the author to do a quick run-over. Overall, the story is enjoyable.