Adityo_WN
Hello everyone, welcome to my first English novel! This is my first Fantasy project on Webnovel and I hope it would spreading happiness to everyone who reads it. Although English is not my mother tongue, I tried my best to write this novel. I hope you will be pleased with this novel. Please kindly leave a comment and support me with feedback. It matters to me, for my writing skill and style as a writer in the future. Without future redo, enjoy, and happy reading all. :) (Started on 12 Oct 2022)
Nice written, it sliw pace and kind of zero to hero journey. If you wish to read a story that has elve, human, and so called manutang, a human with animal tail and ears, this is good for you. But the updtae was to slow, ine chaoter/day with long chaoter. Perhaos 1400 words/ chaoter, it cost me 7-11 gold. Author should diffided this chapter into small one, instead make long one. But iveral is good