Review Detail of Gono_gini01 in Alchemist and the Alderan Academy

Nice written, it sliw pace and kind of zero to hero journey. If you wish to read a story that has elve, human, and so called manutang, a human with animal tail and ears, this is good for you. But the updtae was to slow, ine chaoter/day with long chaoter. Perhaos 1400 words/ chaoter, it cost me 7-11 gold. Author should diffided this chapter into small one, instead make long one. But iveral is good