VashuRajput269
๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
author dropped it because he just felt like it........author dropped it because he just felt like it........author dropped it because he just felt like it........author dropped it because he just felt like it........author dropped it because he just felt like it........author dropped it because he just felt like it........author dropped it because he just felt like it........author dropped it because he just felt like it........author dropped it because he just felt like it........author dropped it because he just felt like it........author dropped it because he just felt like it........author dropped it because he just felt like it........author dropped it because he just felt like it........author dropped it because he just felt like it........
Well itโs a fanfic so I canโt really downgrade the world background nor story development. Iโm reading this a while after it came out so I didnโt have to worry about updating which is the only reason itโs so high, just not to be unfair. The grammar is pretty bad and there are a lot of mistakes littered throughout. The BIGGEST issue is the characters name. Really just made it completely unreadable for me. I get the author probably named the mc after himself or something but it just does not fit and because of it I just had to drop.
Not even 3 chapter in and the goddamn MC is already in love with little aunt for no fucking reason other than being in yun che's body and her loving him. and there are those cliche lines all throught the chapters about how much he loves her and how he'll protect his harem by getting stronger and shit. i so wanted to choke the MC
First of all, the original ATG really made me feel sad, and I dropped it, cause Yun Che started doing sh*t and somehow started to copulate with every beautiful woman in the story. So I decided to switch to fanfics. Yeah although there are some small mistakes in English, but still, the author does a good job, and constantly updates the story, which is rarely seen nowadays. Hope you dont drop the story untill at least YC enters North Devil Realm or just make him go faster to God Realm to, *cough,cough*, meet Mu Xuanyin and her sister. And yeah I just hate Xia Qinguye, I just dont know what is so special bout her, u feel me. Would be cool if you add some M and S relation or just some tentacle monsters, u know what I am saying ๐ All in all thanks for the fanfic, I really enjoyin it more than the original story, and please dont drop it ๐๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ