Well it’s a fanfic so I can’t really downgrade the world background nor story development. I’m reading this a while after it came out so I didn’t have to worry about updating which is the only reason it’s so high, just not to be unfair. The grammar is pretty bad and there are a lot of mistakes littered throughout. The BIGGEST issue is the characters name. Really just made it completely unreadable for me. I get the author probably named the mc after himself or something but it just does not fit and because of it I just had to drop.
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Liked it!
LIKESamKing:Forgot to mention the author just made up bs excuses to keep the name, saying that it was already written. I’ve seen major plot points changed in fanfics through ANs and they were still readable. Honestly it’s incredibly stupid.