Nisiris
There are plenty of writing errors in the early parts ngl. As in, I find sentences incomprehensible at some point. Story development... forced... very... ugh. Character design.... I'll just leave it as a 3... Updating Stability? Well, this deserves a 5 lol. Quite short but consistent. No probs. World Background... I'll leave at 5 as a saving grace for the review....
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Excelente fanfic que recomiendo mucho , todo es muy entretenido e interesante ( ignoren los primeros 2-3 capitulos dónde todo parece demasiado forzado , mejora mucho después de eso ) es increíble la construcción del reino. La única queja en mi opinión sería los demasiados puntos de vista en momentos buenos de la historia u algunos errores en las palabras. Pero todo lo demás excelente 💪👍🤙
The start is a bit rough but after the family drama its good so yeah,the mc is not good nor evil he can kill if needed,he's also a king(made his own kingdom,also family>kingdom),the mc also doesnt act like a virgin who hasnt seen seen a woman,He's op.Also pretty nice kingdombuilding(im no expert but i enjoyed it)also its multiverse/multicross(?)