Review Detail of Wryyyyyyyy in Aegis Schnee The Juggernaut Of Glyphs

There are plenty of writing errors in the early parts ngl. As in, I find sentences incomprehensible at some point. Story development... forced... very... ugh. Character design.... I'll just leave it as a 3... Updating Stability? Well, this deserves a 5 lol. Quite short but consistent. No probs. World Background... I'll leave at 5 as a saving grace for the review....