Angelica2511
I gave 5 stars for this not because I spent too much.. but this novel will make you feel its worth it. Enticing, Addicting , with the FL and ML character that have some misunderstandings,which is part of the plot that will keep you hooked up and ask for more.The story development is good that will keep you think whats next but still keep you looking forward for sweet, funny and happy moments.There are some dramas but that what make it beautiful ❤❤
I swear, Iiterally don’t have anything to complain about. Everything is masterfully done into the peak. The characters are deep, the plot is nice, the world-building is fine, the interactions are extremely lovely! All in all, I seriously love your novel! [img=exp], the way you write, I’m seriously jealous, I wish I had or one day posses your level pf writing skills. Without a doubt your novel is going to blow up pretty soon! [img=recommend][img=recommend]. Well done author, keep going like this and you will rock WN pretty soon. [img=coins]
I think a more effective beginning would've been Everyone waiting for Natasha to show up with the groom waiting at the altar. Starting the main character off in tears without setting the scene properly can lose a reader. In the future ask yourself what is the character responding to and is logical and within their character to do so