bibiyenini
Transporting the character back from the past could be a truly great concept of a story. In spite of the fact that it may be cliche, but for this particular novel, particularly when it includes mythical serpents! The depiction of activities were moreover very point by point. I moreover enjoyed the subject of the story in common. Awesome work creator!
Aye aye! I really enjoyed reading this! :D Firstly, the writing is amazing! :D I don't think I found an error hehe! The author is truly talented in writingg <3 I like the way the author describes the scenes. I could imagine some of them vividly in my head, enhancing my immersion in reading this hehe! I absolutely love the beginning too! :D Me is a sucker for a flashback storytelling, and I have a HUGE soft spot for elderly so-- And the great thing isss, every chapter starts with a beautiful poem! :D Isn't that just so amazing :D As for the character, absolutely great! :D I'll try to steer clear from spoilers hehe There are only 3 chaps, but that alone was enough to make me feeeeel for the charassss :'D Like one moment I like him, and the next I don't, and the next I'm just hoping they will meet and she will change his life aaaa---- If that isn't brilliant chara design then idk what is lol The world-building is already amazing hehe! Me don't know much yet bc it's still chap 3, but so far it's well-thought-out! :D Great jobbb, bibiiii <3
Transporting the character back from the past is a really good concept of a story. Although it may be cliche, but for this specific novel, especially when it involves dragons! I am not familiar with the chinese cultures, but I do have interest on learning these information. It's really fun reading this story, and I invite fellow readers to read this fantasy romance~
This book has a very good start. A lot of writter use melancholy or reminiscent to make a deep conection with the reader, but only a little who were succeed because the element they used was too forced without any balancing plot. But this book flowing the element needed naturaly and the plot also nice with clear but not predictable direction. Author, Thank you for the great piece of work.