Comments of chapter undefined of Library of Heaven's Path

“Un!” Zhang Xuan widened his eyes slightly. “Un!” Zheng Yang nodded his head. Theres alot of this "Un" in many chapters of this story what does it mean?...

Woah! The legendary f5 sect!

“Zhang Yang, don’t be too disappointed! Wang Chao laoshi was the only one who rejected you, you don’t have to be so depressed!” Zheng Yang frowned, unhappy at his friend’s words of consolation. So which is it? 'Zhang Yang' or 'Zheng Yang'? Most readers already find it hard to remember chinese names, but you make it even worse.

Comments getting less and less

Guesses on translation stuff: he would have long made his move. ~> he would have made his move long ago. [Time goes to the end of a sentence, i think.] The number of the students they have, the pace of their improvement ~> The number of the students they had, the pace of their improvement [The rest of the chapter is past tense, so this should be too.] and his heart beats, ‘ge deng!‘. ~> and his heart beat, ‘ge deng!‘. [Past form of "to beat" is still beat - one of those weird verbs. :P]

Xp

it slight hurted my feelings :'(

the last line of the chapter isn't needed.

Tnx

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Nice

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Exploossiioonnn!!

I decided to read this over again from the beginning because the cliff from the recent chapter was two strong two overcome so i decided to two start over and hopefully around the time i reach the cliff i was previously hanging from there will be room two proceed upwards two

Thank you for the chapter.

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Nice

:)

Good Chapter