Reviews of 500th Time Reborn, A World Only Known By Women: The Karma System
500th Time Reborn, A World Only Known By Women: The Karma System
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Author here! Oh boy, I can't explain to you how much fun I am having writing this book! A world without men! Cool enough concept, but lets add 11 other races and give then some funny attributes, and throw out most preconcieved notions about them! What will you find in this book? 1. OP MC 2. MC that takes no sh*t(Can be a bit of a loose cannon) 3. Laughs 4. Women of every flavor(I'm open to idea's!) 5. S*x(Or what are you guys doing here?) 6. Battle thirsty MC 7. Weapon Crafting (Gun's and much more!) 8. Cooking(Because people get hungry) Things you won't find 1. NTR 2.R*pe 3.Abused or Meanly tricked MC 4.Self righteous MC If you read this far, Drop you golden tickets! Gifts of 500 or more and I will drop an extra chapter!
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For me this is author best work, good mc with nice side characters. Character grow here was pretty smooth and not like other dumb author who use the "character grow card" to make mc full retard/naive. World building is good with no large amount of info being thrown at you making the read boring, can't wait for mc to go to another islands and see how other races will react with him being a man. Romance is a little bit forced but still pretty good and i like how we get surprised at how some characters act in some manners showing they are not shallow or bland. Writing quality is good and with a good flow, even the first POV (MC SIDE) is good and don't fell forced or cringe like some authors.
Imagine with me a world of only women, devoid of all men. To some this world would seem ideal, and to others a complete nightmare! I believe our main character Galio finds it to be the former! The female characters reactions to the first ever man in their world and the concepts foreign to them are beyond hilarious, and there is much “exploring” to be done! The characters and dialogue are funny and thought pretty well. I look forward to reading future chapters as Galio continues to explore a literal No man’s land! 👍
MC has a weak mindset. He lived 499 lives?? He looks more like a schoolboy facing the first love. Look for Alexander the Great. In 32 years of his life he built one of the biggest Empires on the Earth. And compare him to the MC. Do you understand the difference now?? Difference in the mindset, will and decision making. "I go where i think is good, i take whatever i want to for i am the God and my word is the Law."
I would like to continue reading the story but from chapter 43 onwards it became unfeasible, I don't know if it's a problem with the site or if it's because of the way the author edited the novel, English is not my native language so I use Google Translate to reading, but from chapter 43 onwards it is not possible, sad since I wanted to be able to continue following the story.
This ongoing WebNovel has quickly become a must-read for me. The author's writing style is so engaging and the world they've created is so rich and detailed. The characters are all so unique and I'm constantly intrigued by their individual storylines. I can't wait to see where this story goes and I highly recommend it to anyone who loves a good ongoing read!
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
