Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto : Chad Uchiha

Bro, could u break the paragraphs. it's hard to understand for what I am commenting . otherwise, no other complaints.. thanks. 👍

The story has potential but the grammar and storytelling of the story is very strange

All telling, no showing. Not storytelling at all.

thanks for the chapter but i think you could make the main caracter less silly and more serious, and it will be good if he train about the eight gates

Thanks for the chapter.