Comments of chapter undefined of Mercenary (Asoiaf)

Its too fast, scenes are more like shorts joined together to just speedrun though an hour long film in a minute.

we really have the impression that it is hasty, the chapters are short, the dialogues are left to the essential and there is nothing transcendent. it's the quality of not improving quickly I will give up

Very hard to read when you use ' instead of " for speech.

Thanks for chapter

Nice chapter

Tftc

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Thanks for the good chapter 👍👍👍👍