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Comments of chapter undefined of In Fallout with a Chat Group

HarkenEliwood
HarkenEliwoodLv13HarkenEliwood

Let's see which side you will take and how you will do it.

User_Derp
User_DerpLv1User_Derp

Some of the paragraphs need some rewriting to fix some grammar

noblej_7BPH
noblej_7BPHLv4noblej_7BPH

I would have recommended putting the teleporters in secluded areas or caves nearby rather than destroying them for the fast travel options .

Shadowhead94
Shadowhead94Lv13Shadowhead94

Great chapter can't wait for the next one

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.

LaurieSha
LaurieShaLv4LaurieSha

Thanks for the chapter.