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Comments of chapter undefined of Hidden Genius: Ayanokouji's Rebirth As Naruto Uzumaki

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jess_weston
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he's 3 and barely reaches Hiruzen's hip. why are you writing him having such a "fight scene" so early in the first place? well duh, it's because he went through the white room so he knows how to fight. .....you're not wrong but he is no longer 14 years old. he is another world and only 3 with no prior training to speak of. I have so much more to say but I want to keep this constructive. You are trying to do too much too early. it doesn't make for good story, when later all you're going to do is describe / summarize everything he's done or everything he will do. I'm all for overpowered characters, but I like steady progression more.

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Rc_Turtle
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just Destroy danzoand spread what all he's done to the village . He and orochimaru were the direct cause of uzushio's fall

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