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Comments of chapter undefined of Pokémon: Climbing the Ladder

Rayan_Alzahrani_4430
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This is a bit of criticism hope it’s okay if not ignore it i think the chapters are too short and what the mc is doing always takes long so it takes a couple of chapters like learning a move took a couple of chapters a battle with a random trainer shouldn’t take more then a chapter you should focus on either making the chapters longer or covering more then one simple thing and muti task rather then spend the whole chapter on doing one thing

WarMachine78
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Thanks for the chapter

Darkujuj
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thanks for the chapter 👍👍👍👍👍