FangYuan1234
Your writing style is great just a shame the gold fingers you create break the lore. It happened in the RI fic and its the same case here. Arguably the most pivotal aspect of danmachi is the symbiosis between mortals and gods and you giving the mc a system just threw that all to the wind. The interactions, characters, scheming thats lost cause the mc doesnt need to join a familia is a far greater loss than the gains of the mc being evil.