Comments of chapter undefined of Ben 10: In Pokemon World with Different Omnitrix

I personally like this fic you are making a unique story with elements that can work well with the right plot. I would research pokemon , Ben 10 , and how a person that size and age would react psychologically to new stimulus of the pokemon world and personal power that let's him do what he wants. so far you have been engaging in 3d person but it can be hard to tell at times with what point of view. more background information would be helpful along with a consistent depiction of his personality. Will the omnitrix scan pokemon and transform him into him version pokemon like if he scanned a Pikachu he would be far larger and buffer with perfect genetics. is the omnitrix making his body the most optimal as humanly possible and that's why he's so strong. Will you include aura and type abilities.will he stay a showman or get realistic and fulfill his dreams. Also you make a clearer depiction of thoughts and talking and human and pokemon speech. will the legendarys take an interst in him. I enjoy this as their are not many tall realistic, or overly hiped up apperence characters and hope you continue. just try to make a consistent story line that makes sense to yourself and the readers.

Also a neat and organized writing style and chapter can make a big difference

Thanks for the chapter