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  • C_Meta_Freedom
    C_Meta_Freedom1d
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    good chapter I hope platinum becomes a alicorn!

    Ch 4 Chapter 3: Ponyville
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  • C_Meta_Freedom
    C_Meta_Freedom3d
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    he's 21

    Ch 4 Chapter 3: Assistant Manager
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  • C_Meta_Freedom
    C_Meta_Freedom3d
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    The next summon should be a ghost pokemon that looks like a weapon

    Ch 9 Chapter 8: Going high (Snoop Dogg)
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    C_Meta_Freedom4d
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    Are you making him overly emotional and in denial about his true feelings, so he puts on an act like his old self to disguise his trauma of death and his past and fears as he seems to be impulsive and searching for distractions or is there another reason?

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    C_Meta_Freedom4d
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    Will he turn into Grey mater to hack into databases in order to get himself a identity in that world and uses the enhanced intelligence to plan to process all the knowledge on the pokemon world he will need? I like this chapter but it is a little rushed between scenes and not much reson for his actions beyond emotional.

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    C_Meta_Freedom4d
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    Will he have more pokemon children ? And pokemon battles are pretty straightforward but as Andre is a person he can fight the traners more directly as they don't expect that.

    Ch 10 10.Team Flare (2/2)
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    C_Meta_Freedom5d
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    This was cool chapter and I like him talking to the pokemon. Would all his pokemon forms be considered a royal variant due to his size? Asli I thought when he transforms he instantly knows his transformations powers and instincts to use as if he was born that species?

    Ch 9 9.Team Flare(1/2)
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    C_Meta_Freedom6d
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    the last half of this confused me

    Ch 7 Chapter 6: Drinks !
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    C_Meta_Freedom6d
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    There are many powerful pokemon like the legendarys and pokemon gods so the pokemon world is a good starting point DNA and power wise. while transformers has fewer options unless he uses upgrade and the hightrix makes a specific cybertronian transformation. he could always go to the transformer's dimension in the future

    Ch 9 Question. (Will Delete later)
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  • C_Meta_Freedom
    C_Meta_Freedom7d
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    good chapter!

    Ch 6 Chapter 5: Going out
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  • C_Meta_Freedom
    C_Meta_Freedom7d
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    This was cool do you have a picture for this form?

    Ch 8 8.First Pokemon
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  • C_Meta_Freedom
    C_Meta_Freedom8d
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    The psychological take on Andre's mental state is interesting as people who are larger than those around them with anxiety can have a lot of insecurities that they hide, I would know. As someone like him who uses other people for validation and to feel better self introspection and accepting the power he has will be difficult as people like that are always told to hold back either by others or by society but now that Andre as the power to break away from societal pressures he can let himself be free in the truest sence with himself and do what he wants without anyone able to tell him differently. Will his desire be to explore everything and collect things and DNA and knowledge because that would be fun as dimensional travel and the hightrix makes anything possible and to fight without restraint as pent up aggression is high in people like him as they can't always find a healthy outlet. I hope he doesn't become a hero or someone who does things without reason as he will probably become suffocated by expectation. Are you going to make a chapter where he realizes how much freedom he has to do what he wants with no constraints? is he going to find places to explore and people t fight and powers to play with.

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    C_Meta_Freedom8d
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    I hope Lucas gets with Caitlin as her and killer frost deserved better and their both awesome

    Ch 4 Chapter 3: Assistant Manager
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  • C_Meta_Freedom
    C_Meta_Freedom8d
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    I get not wanting to be a hero but if you have power to not be a useless drone in the world and have personal freedom to do and go anywhere why wouldn't you?

    No, I just wanted to live a normal life and splurge on my cat, Toy and now talking robot.
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  • C_Meta_Freedom
    C_Meta_Freedom8d
    Replied to Just_Moron

    when I gave power stones

    Ch 7 Not a chapter. (I'll delete it after the next chapter comes out.)
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    C_Meta_Freedom9d
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    You could change you writing style or make a more detailed synopsis. If it makes you feel better your in the top 200 that's something good

    Ch 7 Not a chapter. (I'll delete it after the next chapter comes out.)
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    C_Meta_Freedom9d
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    this is cool is his cover story going to be turbo energy is is meta power and it attracted an alien and they created a symbiotic bond to survive? hope for more chapters soon I love tom

    Ch 3 Chapter 2: N’Baro Aksteel X377
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  • C_Meta_Freedom
    C_Meta_Freedom9d
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    can he understand dpokemon if he turns on the universal translator

    Ch 6 6.HighTrix
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  • C_Meta_Freedom
    C_Meta_Freedom9d
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    I like your alternative take on the aliens and I love how he becomes him version of the aliens where he's bigger and older. How long is his lifespan now as if he is alter geneticly he could theoretically make himself stop aging and live for millenia or forever with the right DNA. Will he change his human form like give himself four arms? also you mention primal force alot with his transformation and after is their a reason?

    Ch 6 6.HighTrix
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  • C_Meta_Freedom
    C_Meta_Freedom10d
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    I like this chapter but there are a few mistakes like their aren't quotations when talking in some areas and when the boy took the picture I don't what andre means along with extra words that make no sense. Also you seem to over exaggerate the atmosphere and his emotions repeatedly at times like when you try over describe some emotions and scenes and repeat yourself . I like the system for the omnitrix set up but it needs more explaining on its functionality like why it's called a hightrix like when Andre was confused when it explained the genetic changes. also I'd lable points of view as it can get confusing on who's talking at first. Overall other that some mistakes it's a good story so far and if I personally rate it it would be 4 out of 5 stars. Hope this helps.

    Ch 5 5.Something Else.
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