Comments of chapter undefined of Genshin Impact; Everburning Fire. Breezing Through The Ranks Of Fatui.

ur writing is pretty amateurish it's clear that pretty much nothing is planned no plots/idea of where ur going, fights are badly choreographed, power scaling unclear, MC agency/goal is unclear, dialogue is amateur and incosnsistent one moment it's fine the next its short to the point and robotic and whatever u want to happen just happens. Point is don't start a story if u have no idea what the story is going to be plan things ffs gl👍