Beelze1
TFTC
I dislike the way you did the dialogue at the beginning with the dashes, afterwards it was actually pretty good
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Thanks for the chapter
thnkx for the chapter
have done misspellings and incorrect words here and there but overall easy to read. thanks for the update.
Thxs for the chap
Thx
Tftc
Thx for the chapter
Not sure I like the stronger white text it's not easy one eyes.