Comments of chapter undefined of Dragon from Winterfell

I’m not a fan of all of this AU content. It’s veering way too far from ASOIAF/Game of Thrones territory with all this original content. It seems like it would be interesting in its own original novel but not in a fanfic with clearly established IP boundaries. Just my opinion.

The writing is kinda messy throughout the chapter

is there any chance you find a Way to Distinguish the Talk between Tun and Jon So the reader knows he is not talking with a bird in the sky with his Mouth but with his mind? like "< Tun you see anything?> " or Write in italic or " 'Tun you see anything?' " just using the "" like in normal Speech is realy confusing like with whom he is talking with ? and then yeah with Tun .. but why no one quistion the lunatic who speaks while walking around? Please its such a smal change with a big impact when Jon is Comunicating with his Animals. Thanks

Thanks for the chapther

tfc