daniel_vera
the time shifting perspectives and recaps make the story more confusing than anything. Making the "timeline" Activitys a Mess. Just tell happenings as they happen, ther was not once a üast scene that cleared anything.
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can you fix the transitions from different point of views and when different days are going on through the chapters I'm getting very confused
Tftc.
thank you for the chapter.
Thanks for chapter
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More!!!
Tftc hope everything turns out the way you want it to
Thx for the chapter
I really wanted to like this but I think I'll have to say Adu goodbye and good luck.
KEEP UP THE GREAT JOB, THANKS!!!!
