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Comments of chapter undefined of Malivoire Descent

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DaoistLORD_PARAGON
DaoistLORD_PARAGONLv4DaoistLORD_PARAGON

Ydk how to write a fight scene tbh, it needs improvement .. .the immediately , suddenly and as in it was too much

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Sung_SooHo
Sung_SooHoLv2Sung_SooHo

đŸ‘ŒđŸ»

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Platofox
PlatofoxLv2Platofox

Zeras on my keyboard

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_ZEPHYR_
_ZEPHYR_Lv11_ZEPHYR_

Tftc author👍🙏

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CelestiaI
CelestiaILv7CelestiaI

Thx

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NixelLazuli
NixelLazuliLv3NixelLazuli

the fight scene needed better work . describe less actions of dodging , since zeras has power already . But the veins bulging is ... ok