Comments of chapter undefined of Malivoire Descent

superb first chapter👍

Already hooked right from the first Chapter Really nice😌

This is...Lit. like this is the best first chapter i have ever seen for an apocalypse kind of novel. Your previous works have always been awesome but this one is just... on another level entirely. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

OMG. This is one heck of a chapter. I really love this Malivoire Descent type of apocalypse. The best introduction to this type of story I have ever seen, to be honest. I'll be waiting for the next chapter, Author

This part is surely skipped and go like tens years ago, Earth blah-blah, but the author brought it out splendid

as I advise other authors. make sure to reread. I will start commenting mistakes and corrections once I start reading continuously.

A bit generic since the MC is at the bottom of the food chain, but good job with the first chap💯

Hmm I need to read more it seems decent ig tho

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Nothing special yet but so far so good Hopefully it gets better or dosent get worse

I need more chapters to decide

I’m hooked on just the first chapter

The first chapter is pretty good . The magic and power is alluring and makes me want to flip the next page .

i will say it looks like a good start, but I'll let the future chapters decide that