Comments of chapter undefined of Mark of the Multiversal Pretender

Great start. Hide your fictional waifus, MC is a suspicious person.

found it. loved it. shared it.

Well, Lets start, hope it will be better [img=recommend][img=Out of it]

Hope this fic is good as the original author [img=recommend]

I hope the harem still exists, it doesn't need to be too many, 3-4 is enough.[img=recommend]

Honest again. You should have put a bit more effort, manage to scam the kid who is part of the underworld, be in the run for a while, scam him again and only then be found out.

Thanks for the chapter and great 👍 start with this story. Looking forward to reading 📖 what comes next.

Mi primera reacción al ver la interacción del protagonista tratando de engañar a la gente con métodos bastante visibles no veo mucho futuro. Era claro que se podía notar que era un estafador solo por que lo detenistes en su camino y empezaste a hablar de negocios. si hubieras hablado de inversión a la empresa y no de vender productos sería más creíble.

Can you include cupid's chocalate and Undefeated bahammu chronicles

O Hope you not remove Rapunzel.

La verdad espero que el harem este bien estructurado y desarrollado, no como en tu otro FF.

real.

Thanks for the chapter 📖😁👍

Buena la historia tiene un giro interesante más por la personalidad del protagonista

Thanks for the chapter