Comments of chapter undefined of Ken 17. A Halo Transmigration Tale

can't wait for the next chapter

also thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter! Big improvement in paragraph length. (not being walls of text.) Just need to fix the issue with a lot of your words being mushed together. I suggest reviewing your chapters before posting to make sure all words are properly spaced out. Though it can still be fixed through editing as well.

That's a halla cliffhanger..