Comments of chapter undefined of Blood is Life - A Warhammer Vampire Fiction
Blood is Life - A Warhammer Vampire Fiction
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Wait, to create undead a corpse is used, for medium undead more magic, and for superior undead a lot of magic and a soul. So wouldn't it be easier to transform a living human into a superior undead? Using the target's death as a catalyst for the process, and how he is alive and has a soul during the ritual/Spell, it would probably be much simpler to create a superior living haven.
Thanks for the chapters. -But why did the character go from having no remorse or guilt to suddenly having them? Having already accepted his situation and come to terms with everything you could do that instead of feeling sorry and remorse he understood that servants are more useful completely loyal to him and healthy and I think that as a personality he should be even more ruthless and calculating. -In that world I don't think there is room for kindness and altruism without reason. Could you make auxiliary chapters 1 with cultivation levels and 1 with magic? Here are some story ideas: - Since the story began circa 2010 and the end times begin circa 2519, you could make it go back to the times of the great catastrophe in circa -5600 or even earlier through the realm of chaos. -What was written before could be justified by saying that the first realms/cultivation levels are easier to overcome but then it becomes more and more difficult (otherwise because there aren't millions of demigods and gods) and that maybe he encounters a block when he is a duke (it seems like the most correct choice to me) or even a heroic spirit in the 500 years before the end of time and then when he goes back in time you could make him increase his cultivation gradually until he reaches the limit of the demigod and when the world is destroyed you can become a deity. -For his powers you could have him develop a way to take the essences of the various races and obtain their characteristics, physiques, powers and appearances in this way as well as cultivate in the ways of all the races and when he goes back in time you could make the various races unite to make him deified through his actions and conquests, such as Sigmar where cults are created in his name in this way when he becomes a god he will have more power and dominions than the other gods, you could make him reach the same level as the gods of chaos and have him create his own kingdom in the kingdom of chaos as well as having him physically go to Warhammer age of Sigmar.
