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Comments of chapter undefined of DC: Dimensional Luck

Kiyoung
KiyoungLv4Kiyoung

Hermione is spoiling this novel for me. I mean there's nothing much to gain from Harry Potter world, compared to DC, DxD their world is very weak. And even if Harry Potter World, there are better characters like Nymphadora, Daphne, Luna etc. Hermione and her personality is so meh.

Daoist_windfall_69
Daoist_windfall_69Lv4Daoist_windfall_69

To get a higher quality novel please stop focusing on the characters in other worlds. Due to how the story is structured I literally cannot make myself care about anyone of them even a tiny bit, so it just ruins the rest of the novel. I only care about the MC and Lena. What is the reason you focus on other worlds even? Also the discussion of plot from different fictional stories just feels like repetition and writing from a wiki structured like a conversation. Why are you rehashing the plot of every single fictional work included??????

The_Envious_One
The_Envious_OneLv13The_Envious_One

bro I really wish this fic focused more on the dc story and the group chat every once in a while

Ballad
BalladLv5Ballad

God Hermione is so meh, it's so mentally pain inducing to read her moronic tendencies for someone so called smart.

Trouxa_157
Trouxa_157Lv3Trouxa_157

I think you should limit information about other worlds to dimensional chat and not keep changing points of view, this harms immersion in the story, not to mention that the development of the main character will be harmed by the slowness of the story, thus reducing the quality. As the MC traverses the worlds, the changes in secondary characters' perceptions and viewpoints will become more interesting. please author-sama I ask you to develop the DC world first, if you think this will delay the other worlds, add a time difference in Dimensional Chat. thanks for the chapter.

hlh987655321
hlh987655321Lv4hlh987655321

thank you for the awesome chapters and I hope you have a wonderful week

Blackheart99
Blackheart99Lv14Blackheart99

Thanks for the chapter

Alucard_7894
Alucard_7894Lv2Alucard_7894

Thanks for the chapter

Maradilue
MaradilueLv13Maradilue

👍

glmo11
glmo11Lv5glmo11

Wow how blind can you be when you don't realise that someone was manipulating the life of harry potter even though she's already reading and watching the story.

DARK_SAGE
DARK_SAGELv4DARK_SAGE

Keep going please đŸ€©

jcp1207
jcp1207Lv3jcp1207

Gracias por el capĂ­tulo

BrownOptometrist
BrownOptometristLv11BrownOptometrist

Great chapter, keep up the awesome work 😍

Lotus04
Lotus04Lv3Lotus04

TFTC

DaoistMG3hGZ
DaoistMG3hGZLv13DaoistMG3hGZ

Thanks!!

DaoistMG3hGZ
DaoistMG3hGZLv13DaoistMG3hGZ

Thanks!!