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Comments of chapter undefined of Souls in Teyvat

Kevin_Ss
Kevin_SsLv2Kevin_Ss

Pensaba que dejabas de escribir. El giro es muy bueno, en mi opinión.

Exargna
ExargnaLv1Exargna

Another arch with a blind protagonist... I'm already tired of this cliche, it haunts me everywhere.

ExaltedBlank
ExaltedBlankLv6ExaltedBlank

man i thought something big will happen after that last warnning yesterday, but it's just this?? bro I'm all in for whatever development route you take that looks good in your eyes. its's your story and I'm here to see how it's unfolds and support you along the way. Keep up what you are doing it's great.

SnowMan
SnowManLv4SnowMan

It is not a fighting fanfic, I understand it but the protagonist is stupid and very impulsive and they told him that he was dangerous but since he is impulsive he did not care and he did it anyway, I repeat it is not a fighting fanfic but it is not an interesting fanfic, protagonist is stupid and weak and will surely be killed by a small slime (google translate) dropping

Lucikiel
LucikielLv4Lucikiel

Thanks for the chapter

pardonforintrusion
pardonforintrusionLv4pardonforintrusion

its okay, your writing id loveable and i like the mc character its not a problem he is blind or not, i even read a mc whos body is a literally bug. so write story as you deem fun, dont let people judge you

the_banana_catfrfr
the_banana_catfrfrLv1the_banana_catfrfr

nah bro this is unique and looks like its gonna be really cool

shambe
shambeLv4shambe

I thought Guizhong was gonna die or something so you had me at high suspense the whole chapter. But then the blindness came, I admit I'm a bit disappointed, just a little bit though because I expected worse and I would've rioted if you really decided to kill Guizhong. It's like 2 evils but you picked the lesser one, plus you said it's temporary, and he'll regain it eventually in the future so I'm okay with this, I've read The Blind Swordsman fic after all😂

Star_Lord_1201
Star_Lord_1201Lv4Star_Lord_1201

it's an interesting twist. also it's your story author-nim you can develop it how you want, honestly it's very good so far so continue your work however you see fit, I will support you along the way as this is a great fanfic .

Affe_Te
Affe_TeLv4Affe_Te

A deficient protagonist? I like

madbuha
madbuhaLv4madbuha

there is nothing wrong with a twist