Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnation of the Strongest Healer
Reincarnation of the Strongest Healer
Idczhen
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PancakesWitchLv13PancakesWitch
this is a rather relaxed novel, there's been little action so far, despite what the genre usually indicates, have you read any of the popular VR stories? they always start with a lot of action, and usually never stop. This would go to a more slice of life story because you seem more focused on exploring the NPCs and the world building, wihtout enough action to make it easy to digest. try adding more action if possible (and if you want)
IdczhenAuthorIdczhen
hehe, thanks for the advice, and yes, I already added some tensions, but it's in the draft and not published yet XDDD
PancakesWitch:hmm, but there's no stopping you for mixing them both, no? you're making these plots and you have a goal, why not put monsters in between, invading creatures, evil players trying to ruin the NPC he's tryint to help, and so on? you could make all these opportunities but you're making things feel rather smooth and relaxed, there's a need for some tension to keep the readers in a grip so they keep reading, but at the end its up to you, you know best
