Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnation of the Strongest Healer
Reincarnation of the Strongest Healer
Idczhen
Chapter comments6
this is a rather relaxed novel, there's been little action so far, despite what the genre usually indicates, have you read any of the popular VR stories? they always start with a lot of action, and usually never stop. This would go to a more slice of life story because you seem more focused on exploring the NPCs and the world building, wihtout enough action to make it easy to digest. try adding more action if possible (and if you want)
hmm, but there's no stopping you for mixing them both, no? you're making these plots and you have a goal, why not put monsters in between, invading creatures, evil players trying to ruin the NPC he's tryint to help, and so on? you could make all these opportunities but you're making things feel rather smooth and relaxed, there's a need for some tension to keep the readers in a grip so they keep reading, but at the end its up to you, you know best
Idczhen:There will be actions. It’s just that the MC is currently setting the stage and maximizing his profits first before making a move. And I know most popular VR novel has lots of action but they tend to focus so much on it that the plot and character seemed one dimensional. I want to write a VR novel that don’t just have action where the MC goes in and finish this dungeon or killing that monsters (rinse and repeat). I want to write a more goal-oriented MC where he does things for a reason and letting the readers explore his thought and every scheme step by step.
