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I Can Perfect All Things

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PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchLv13PancakesWitch

interesting introduction, albeit it lacks a strong pull to the story and falls into redudancy a little bit

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Sixtee
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Can you check out my book? Please? 🙏🙏

PancakesWitch:ah, yeah, i usually check new novels all the time when I'm bored (and procrastinating), sorry if I was harsh, your novel has potential but it tends to fall off because you write a lot of unnecessary things in between the juicy stuff, i think you need to be more focused in what you write, and separate things accordingly. usually first chapters have to pull the reader, so start by introducing the cheat you talk about in the novel title, and perhaps some action and the main character's goal. although the scene of the first chapter is endearing in a way, it would fit a much later chapter instead than the first in terms of interaction and cuteness
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Blue_J_Writes
Blue_J_WritesLv11Blue_J_Writes

I’ve seen some comments on pacing for the first chapter. I can see what they’re saying but it’s not much of an issue to it. As long as you stay consistent to it and it has something in chapter two to kick things up a gear (I’ll read chapter 2 soon).

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Dream_Lord14
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Well the first chapter was a little bit unique but there is no intense action not enough pull on the readers for a first chapter but still good For a good first chapter You can check out Malivoire Descent

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junelypaistan
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