Comments of chapter undefined of [OreGaIru : New Me!]
[OreGaIru : New Me!]
WrightBrothers
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I'm sorry if I sound rude, but I don't feel any changes in the plot and it is following the same direction as in canon... but again it's been a year or two since I last watched SNAFU
Can't say I'm disappointed tho, as your grammar is quite good and I can tell that you've put a lot of your time into this, but I just hoped for something to change and have some further exploration of the world.. One example could be hikigaya venturing into the business world with his future knowledge and the other would be to look at things from a different perspective and try to be a better version of himself and in conclusion I just felt like he accepted things way too soon and just didn't change much from this... however, I hope you can explore his university life from where you can branch out your own story
WrightBrothers:True. First of all, thanks for being so polite and considerate. (I expected to face much harsh criticism on this topic.) You could have just lashed out, and nothing would have changed. Coming back, I understand why you feel that way because I almost followed the same 'setting' from the anime, and it will be the same for a few more chapters, but I did add my 'touch' to every chapter.(Though you can expect some changes to this approach after a few chapters) Since you watched the anime almost two years ago, I think you only remembered the 'setting' which I didn't change much, as I mentioned. It was kinda a conscious decision from my side. I want to see how differently I can portray 'this' Hikigaya from the original... So, sorry if I happened to disappoint you.image
