Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Failed Knight

Use less emojis

Dont use emojis , will you ? It feels.... Strange

The grammar is killing this for me. Everything suffers for it, including the humour. This fic is getting great visibility, so hopefully it gets better before too long.

Using so many emojis make me feel like your an incompetent writer, who doesn't know how to describe facial expressions and use them to express how a character is feeling. I will continue to read at least five more chapters to see if the emojis lessen as you grow as a writer, if I don't see any improvement I'm dropping the story.