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Comments of chapter undefined of Domination: Limitless Growth

Ikasuki
IkasukiLv5Ikasuki

Which adult is going to try and beat up what they beleive to be a kid because they stared at them… is this how you write one of the good Marine officer ?

Gabichu_Yeah
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Personally I feel that the author focuses a lot on emotions and small actions, a little of that is fine but in this fanfic they are very highlighted and honestly they make me a little uncomfortable, maybe there are people who like it but personally I like the minimum of that, a fight story does not need more than what is necessary to work.

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LeonardoDiCaprio1
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good chapter keep it up

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Murod
MurodLv3Murod

thanks for the chapter

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Mustafa_Enes
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Thanks for the chapter

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Veldanava_00
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TFTC👍

romil
romilLv5romil

thanks for the chapter

JackYoda
JackYodaLv2JackYoda

Thanks for the chapter I like cookies