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Comments of chapter undefined of Mage King in Amalgam-Verse (Marvel) (DC) (HP)

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I thought this was good though I kind of expected this to happen

Merv1023
Merv1023Lv2Merv1023

Could you rewrite it focusing more on the character's story and adventure and placing limitations on the ability at the beginning of the story because I felt you focused too much on the lemons and made the story lose some of its interesting narrative and also that if you combine Marvel and DC, these same ones have their worlds of magic in DC everything is relatively hidden like Harry Potter but it exists throughout the verse even in outer space while in Marvel they are not like that except for some exceptions like vampires and demons there is a great variety of dimensions and massive invasions and dangers as tiny and that the sorcerers do not pay attention to them and let them be on Earth

Gh0st00
Gh0st00Lv15Gh0st00

figures. writers always do this 😒

Kirin80814
Kirin80814Lv4Kirin80814

take your time and don't nerf mastery to much in a dc/marvel world he'd need all the power he can get

ItzVatsal12
ItzVatsal12Lv14ItzVatsal12

ok . hope to see u soon...

BLITZ2
BLITZ2Lv1BLITZ2

You should of started during the ww2 saga captain america times it would of been easier!!!!!!!!

literl010
literl010Lv1literl010

Can't say I'm not disappointed, but I hope you do eventually come back to this. Perhaps limiting the number of OCs, only have 1 crossover instead of 2, and making his growth slower will help.

Daoist316866
Daoist316866Lv4Daoist316866

Shame for us readers but understandable 👍

Soulderean
SouldereanLv4Soulderean

I hope you come back

Chips_fanatic
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Daniel_Lopez_1155
Daniel_Lopez_1155Lv2Daniel_Lopez_1155

Espero que vuelvas y no termines el fanfic

I_am_God5
I_am_God5Lv1I_am_God5

And dropped

Kleber_Silva
Kleber_SilvaLv3Kleber_Silva

I always had doubts about how you would manage the coexistence between Dumbledore, Yao and Zatara.

Minah_Barunang
Minah_BarunangLv4Minah_Barunang

Okey

Logan_Lovell
Logan_LovellLv4Logan_Lovell

hope you come back when you feel like it