Kenji_Makoto
SPOILERS Honestly, the game development part doesn't seem like a good fit. I'm not very involved in that world, but it doesn't seem to add depth to the story, I understand why a Peter Parker would use lol and angry birds to make money, but with Bruce Wayne it seems unnecessary to spend so much time on it, not just what he says he works daily, lacking time before having the clone, but rather the number of chapters. As a reader, I encourage all writers to explore and have fun according to their interests, but I detect two problems. - the whole Japanese company part doesn't really add up to the story except for the genius boy, at least if you don't know all the references. - in the world of DC, creating immersive VR technology will at best make SAO look like child's play, with so many villains, gods and aliens it does not seem advisable to connect all brains to machines.