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i am 100% sure cecil poisoned his own daughter. but why? a mercy killing? if cecil did not know that cruden was going to crash the wedding then maybe cecil tried to kill his daughter to spare her the pain of being r*ped by bruce during the wedding night?? like a mercy killing. that would be both so sad and bitersweet at the same time :( but also why was cecil so protective of roselia by keeping her locked up? i bet that is why she rebelled when she turned 18. i would too if i suddenly had the freedom of a legal adult
Consistency is lacking here! First his eyes were violet, then blue, and now a darker grey than usual. Her eyes were hazely- grey, then bright green, then moss green. I mean, eye colors can slightly change due to lighting, from shifting of moods, or from turning into a vampire or a werewolf, but were any of these reasons given? No. You're a good writer, so don't get sloppy, it's distracting...