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Comments of chapter undefined of Alpha, Please Be Gentle

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MelBri
MelBriLv15MelBri

Maybe she's allergic to seafood or just clams? As we know from WWII, when the Allied forces fed the starving prisoners, what would seem like a normal amount of food to us would be too much for someone who has been starved for that long, and one could get sick. Foaming at the mouth, however...

Uwanthi
UwanthiLv15Uwanthi

Something really off with Rosalie’s family. Why was she kept inside the pack house. I feel like Cecil isn’t Rosalie’s biological father. Maybe Rosalie is a hybrid, author mentioned Rosalie was born early and she is small compared to others

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GetInLoser
GetInLoserLv11GetInLoser

i am 100% sure cecil poisoned his own daughter. but why? a mercy killing? if cecil did not know that cruden was going to crash the wedding then maybe cecil tried to kill his daughter to spare her the pain of being r*ped by bruce during the wedding night?? like a mercy killing. that would be both so sad and bitersweet at the same time :( but also why was cecil so protective of roselia by keeping her locked up? i bet that is why she rebelled when she turned 18. i would too if i suddenly had the freedom of a legal adult

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tisshypoo22
tisshypoo22Lv14tisshypoo22

Why would her father want to poison her.. I can't wait to find out what really happened before so exciting. Author I love you work so far..

Artemis_XL
Artemis_XLLv14Artemis_XL

She must be something special for her dad to lock her up. I’m getting the vibes of “if I can’t have her then nobody will”.

MelBri
MelBriLv15MelBri

Consistency is lacking here! First his eyes were violet, then blue, and now a darker grey than usual. Her eyes were hazely- grey, then bright green, then moss green. I mean, eye colors can slightly change due to lighting, from shifting of moods, or from turning into a vampire or a werewolf, but were any of these reasons given? No. You're a good writer, so don't get sloppy, it's distracting...

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