Nashi103
So a Komi something Yandere? And if he is right about the beginning of the story, he could easily become a seinen if he met someone with other intentions like some other story that some know (Metamorphosis)
Nashi103:Personally, I'm trying POV's, at the moment I'm using them to complete missing parts of the chapter or give some depth to the characters and their emotions and not just be "I like you, so I can do whatever I want", I want to see how they relate or think. clear example is Komi. In the manga she is very cute and calm, she also becomes brave and bold over time. However, in the beginning it was too manipulable, someone with bad intentions could make it fall to the bottom.... *Coff*Emergence*Coff* Furthermore, it was specified from the beginning that Komi had low self-esteem and she tends to think a lot about things. That's why I write it this way. I'm just experimenting though. I am also a faithful believer in Komi-San, no matter how cute and calm she looks, she has tremendous potential to become a horror Yandere.
Your doing great keep it up. Don't think your overdoing komi characters. beliveve me The fanfic i read on komi. Gave me scars which will never heal. their are also some great komi fanfics, sheesh look at me ranting in the comments. well i hope your densits appointment was well, And glad to see someone listening to me and did get an 8 hour or less sleep. keep up the good work.