I'd like to see Kaizen forming some real bonds, Kakashi is material for a solid friendship, in the future see him just chilling with the bros, or going out for the night in a bar or something, maybe some girlfriends. All in all I'd like to see him more chill, thanks for the hard work author-san!

I don't disagree with your point, but he was so perfect that it's strange, reaching the age of 50 in a profession where it's common to die early leaves its mark on people, even more so on someone as perceptive as a good Nara, not to mention that orphan origin is very open, who were his parents, his ancestors? What was the MC like before he became aware of his old life? Even a genius needs a base, if while growing up he only played with the other kids it's not a very solid background, for an analytical mind it passes, but his fighting prowess against the older boys is way off the mark, how did an orphaned civilian have so much proficiency in completely dominating 3 almost-graduates without receiving any significant injuries? Very suspicious

This chapter was good, but I was expecting something more serious, since as a kunoichi this principal's duty was to extract as much information as possible from this first contact, something like a dance to find out who our Kaizen really is, having all the micro-expressions being analyzed, all these millimetrically perfect answers from the MC, in my opinion, are very suspicious, I don't think even Tobirama would be so genius when compared to the MC, not to mention that there should have been a background check, what the MC was like when he was in the orphanage, who his parents are and so on. All in all, I liked, the fact that they didn't suspect him so much because of his age and the fact that he doesn't have a bizarre background, so I think it's valid that he passed the principal' check without too many problems.

I don't like that in this ff Hiruzen seems even more twisted than usual, it seems like a more ordinary Chinese plot with all these weird power dynamics, but the story isn't bad in general

If I were the MC I'd seek help from his aunt Andromeda, I think she or her husband are lawyers (I'm not sure if it's canon), as far as I know they're good people who are worth keeping in touch with.

I agree that they didn't seem to be that talented, but Rin was one of the best kunoichi of her year, she had a talent for iryoninjutsu, Obito was a bit weak, he was the last dead of his year, wasn't he? But even if they weren't as incredible as Kakashi, they were still on the team led by Minato, who was already relevant in the story, so I think it's going to be necessary to put them in Class A.

This is being the best representation of an institution really focused on nurturing and producing good future assets, in Canon everything seemed very simplified, almost like a normal college. I like that you are building a very solid world, I emphasize that there is a lot of potential here, I can't wait for the story to acquire more complex tones

This discussion is interesting, in the world of Naruto how much does chakra really change someone's physiology? I'm not talking about people like Hoshigaki Kisame whose clan has somehow acquired similarities with sharks, I'm talking about shinobis without a clan, like Sakura, she seems very "human" to me, a kunai in a vital point seems to be able to kill most of them, but in comparison we have Gai and Lee who focused only on the body and are able to last a onger. That's the question.

The reading isn't bad, but it's a bit insipid, soulless, was it done with the help of the gpt? The personality that the MC adopts towards others is too much of a good guy, he talks a bit generic, he doesn't seem transparent, he seems too nice, he lacks a sauce. As an experienced assassin, he should know that no one likes a goody two shoes, the interactions have to be more complex than just praising and comforting in a generic way. The descriptions seem too long and a bit cold, they didn't hold me as much. My review may have been too harsh and unfair, sorry if I was too rude, I liked the changes you made, it seems much more realistic than canon, your story has a lot of potential but lacks spice, thanks for the hard work author-san

It's been a while since I last read a Naruto FF in which the MC doesn't hide his abilities, although there's some truth in fearing Danzo, I'm not sure it's so easy for him to hijack any good seed in the making. I like how it's going, thanks for the hard work author-san!

I also like the slow speech, but as a friend here said, it would be nice if he was 100% animated when it was really necessary

Nebula is very cute