Comments of chapter undefined of Stargate: The Sov'ren

Man this is so good I wish I could contribute to the SG fanfic internet library but I’m already writing on Naruto. You are the mastermind here, but I could guess that you intend on taking the civilisation building trope. Which is honestly the best. From the other similar fic I have read, there’s a few pitfalls and advices to be aware of imo. • When you create original ships, try to not openly take inspiration of foreign Sci if verse such as Star Wars. It’s of bad taste really. • Try to not make the MC the master of a slave/robot empire. The way I see it, it’s much more satisfying to see the main character leading others to build something as a community rather than just the MC merely creating soulless nanites alone in aboard his orbital ship. • Try to not render things too easy for the MC, like going to Atlantis hoarding all top tier tech right off the bat. it reeks of plot armour when authors do this. Thank you so much for your time, I’ll leave a 5-star review when your fic gets to 10 chap

Bonjour et merci pour ce chapitre on est long très loin de Stargate korr, c'est rafraîchissant qu'il soit à la fois humain et goauld avec l'autre fanfiction on est très vite passé ea un demi-dieu

Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter

I thank you for the chapter.

Danke für das Kapitel bitte weiter so

Thanks for the chapter