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Rowan_Wild

Rowan_Wild

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I hate plot armor

2020-06-04 JoinedFrance
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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild17d
    Commented

    WELCOME BACK ! GENTS CHEER FOR MY GUY SO HE STAYS !

    Ch 46 [Confrontation (Part 2/2)]
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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild17d
    Replied to LuluViBritania

    Well I appreciate your opinion was it actually worth a 2 star rated review before reading the story ? 😅 It’s quite harmful to the whole thing you know

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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild23d
    Replied to Freaxx101

    He won’t become Kage. His involvement with ninja villages will be actually quite minimal. I know the clan seems a bit too strong compared to cannon powers at the moment. But don’t worry, I care a lot about balance and realism so don’t worry everything will be alright.

    Ch 16 Rally (2)
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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild23d
    Replied to Freaxx101

    I’ll try but I am truly in the middle of my exam period and although I enjoy it a lot and won’t drop it anytime soon for sure, writing does not generate any income for me at the moment so it’s really hard to dedicate it lots of time as I have to study and do side work to sustain my finances. Secondly, I explain a little more about how bloodline purity works in my story but to keep it short, there’s not a lot that changes for an individual beyond ~40% bloodline purity. That’s because between 0% and 40%, an individual of the Ōtsutsuki lineage awaken a blood limit every ~+10% of purity. But beyond that, it’s just improvement of the already active bodily characteristics such as a better body, chakra, dojutsu, talent… etc. Hagoromo had half of the Ōtsutsuki bloodline, but he had almost all of the abilities a full blooded Ōtsutsuki had. Indra had barely a quarter Ōtsutsuki bloodline, and his abilities were actually really subpar compared to what it should have been at this purity level because Hagoromo purposefully tweaked his son’s heritage to make them complementary. Toneri had less than half of Haru’s purity, but he was still able to awaken the Tenseigan. Boruto had an even poorer purity than either of them, but he was still able to awaken the Jōgan. Which means that nearly all of Shibai’s legacy is still dormant within every descendants of the Ōtsutsuki lineage to some degree. I won’t spoil much about Haru tho.

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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild28d
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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild28d
    Replied to StardustVeldanava

    My guy is four at the moment leave him be 🥹🥲🥹

    Ch 16 Rally (2)
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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild29d
    Replied to DaoistcaqwL5

    It’s a bit complicated. In the past centuries, it’s just that they were not interested in the mainland at all and just gathering some natural ressources from time to time. In the last few decades however they have established a trading relationship with a worldly power and they are gradually increasing their involvement with the Shinobi World affairs to some extent. I’ll cover this in the future but one of the main reasons is to find and retrieve the Gedo Mazo that has been stolen when Madara summoned it.

    Whilst some methods were the private intellectual property of some warriors and their disciples, many Kekkei Genkai level and a few Kekkei Tōta level chakra releases were available in the Ōtsutsuki clan.
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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild29d
    Replied to NalThang

    Toneri is eleven currently. Hinata is about seven. This story is AU, in many ways. But every changes will make sense in time. Actually I didn’t even watch The Last 🤣 I know it’s bold of me to write on it like that but I couldn’t be bothered. Be lenient if some minor details differ from the movie but do tell if there are problematic ones (coherence wise...).

    Ch 7 Optional courses
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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild1mth
    Replied to StardustVeldanava

    Yup, I’ve taken a bit of time off for my holidays and I’m halfway through the next, should be done tomorrow or the day after. Thank you for your support :)

    Ch 15 Rally (1)
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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild1mth
    Commented

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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild1mth
    Replied to DaoistcaqwL5

    Because he doesn’t respect Haru. So as he is petty, immature, and dissatisfied with him because he is the reason his sister ditched him(he is a siscon), he is messing around. There another reason why, but you’ll find out in one or two chapters

    "Tsss." Fujisuke hissed. "Don't worry I'll go. But here's the thing. If you do not stop leeching on my sister, I promise that you'll earn yourself an humiliation that you've never experienced before. It'll make a good show for the others later at the sparring matches, and a proper warning for the little mongrels like you."
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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild1mth
    Replied to DaoistcaqwL5

    Kinda yeah. But the curriculum is the biggest culprit. Quite frankly, it didn’t even make sense to have such a stupid curriculum in the canon. In four to five years, they could have taught tree walking, nature transformation, medical chakra basics, some genjutsu… Especially as they are at war once or twice a generation.

    It is surprisingly easy.. he thought, satisfied. Konoha genins were trash. About four to five years in the academy, such a long curriculum of emptiness and time wasted. Compared to Sakura that barely did decent at age twelve, he did better at the tender age of four.
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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild1mth
    Replied to DaoistcaqwL5

    Because I used the Six Path era term for the types of techniques that were created when the Sage and his Sons gave chakra to mankind. Kenjutsu is much older than ninshu or genshu. Whilst those terms were gradually replaced with ninjutsu etc on the mainland with time, they were not on the moon that has been isolated for a long time.

    "Fuinshu is the art of the seals, to handle various needs. You have already encountered one a week ago in the shrine of the blood." Revealed Hantaro. "Similarly, a very good chakra control and a sharp mind are required. Kenjutsu is the art of handling swords and blades, an ancestral discipline of the world that has always made fighters a lethal force and pairs well with the Shikotsumyaku. Botanics is not really a warrior art, but rather the knowledge of the various fruits vegetable materials that makes poisons and panaceas, and how to cultivate them. Lastly, Medicals arts is the discipline that covers how to heal the human body. Of course this is just a generic and simplistic presentation."
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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild1mth
    Replied to Idkyk

    No. He’s a hybrid with 1/7th of his DNA coming from Kaguya, and 6/7th being human. What makes some get all 5 affinities in the canon is things like Rinnegan. And not having an affinity doesn’t mean that he can’t use fire or wind release. Just that the practicing his own affinities he has twice the results with half the effort.

    Ch 15 Rally (1)
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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild1mth
    Replied to Storm2023

    He does, kinda. But in my story ninshu/ninjutsu isn’t that easy. Hand signs are only what you see, but there’s a specific way to circulate, manipulate the chakra internally that is recorded on the forbidden seal that Haru has no access too. He can try to guess recreate it by guess/error, but for the time being his time is tight and he doesn’t want to waste it on something so hazardous at this point, focusing on his chakra growth, taishu and his other plans. Maybe he will try after the interclass competition tho.

    "Sure." Replied Hantaro. "First of all, I do not recommend that you take more than one or two optional courses. You have to understand than you can not excel in everything at the same time even if you have the talent for it because our time and energy is limited. Ninshu and Taishu are compulsory because they are the most fundamental aspects of a warrior, so they are still your priority. And secondly, whilst the compulsory courses classes are divided by year and family grade, optional courses aren't. Meaning that you may be mixed with older aspirant warriors and people from the branch family."
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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild1mth
    Replied to Storm2023

    Sadly unless he goes on a trip to Konoha that won’t happen I’m afraid

    "Sure." Replied Hantaro. "First of all, I do not recommend that you take more than one or two optional courses. You have to understand than you can not excel in everything at the same time even if you have the talent for it because our time and energy is limited. Ninshu and Taishu are compulsory because they are the most fundamental aspects of a warrior, so they are still your priority. And secondly, whilst the compulsory courses classes are divided by year and family grade, optional courses aren't. Meaning that you may be mixed with older aspirant warriors and people from the branch family."
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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild1mth
    Replied to diablo_soso

    No it’s my own stuff pal sorry, I wish I could read it mtl too 🤣 But gotta write it eh

    Fujisuke who's face had taken a green shade at Haru's blatant disdain refrained from saying any nastiness in the end.
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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild1mth
    Posted

    Honestly the story I’m the most excited about in all my gallery at the moment. Writing quality is spotless, and for the time being I can not ask for a better plot. If you’ve watched Stargate for a while back in the day, it’s very easy to pick up even if you’re rusty and can’t recall everything. Don’t miss it !

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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild1mth
    Replied to Benoit_Valtin

    Pas sûr que l’auteur parle français… D´ailleurs tu aurais d’autres fic du genre ? Sait on jamais

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  • Rowan_Wild
    Rowan_Wild1mth
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    Man this is so good I wish I could contribute to the SG fanfic internet library but I’m already writing on Naruto. You are the mastermind here, but I could guess that you intend on taking the civilisation building trope. Which is honestly the best. From the other similar fic I have read, there’s a few pitfalls and advices to be aware of imo. • When you create original ships, try to not openly take inspiration of foreign Sci if verse such as Star Wars. It’s of bad taste really. • Try to not make the MC the master of a slave/robot empire. The way I see it, it’s much more satisfying to see the main character leading others to build something as a community rather than just the MC merely creating soulless nanites alone in aboard his orbital ship. • Try to not render things too easy for the MC, like going to Atlantis hoarding all top tier tech right off the bat. it reeks of plot armour when authors do this. Thank you so much for your time, I’ll leave a 5-star review when your fic gets to 10 chap

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