Comments of chapter undefined of Avatar Legend Of Korra: Two At Once
Avatar Legend Of Korra: Two At Once
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Juan_Garay_0225:seriously?? I'll have to read it again because either I don't remember it or I didn't see it.
My current thoughts on the story may be biased cause I’ve been wanting to see a legend of Korra ff. Thoughts on the mc not bad has potential but is a bit inconsistent emotion wise I get it he’s like 13.But in one chapter he kills a bunch of gang members then in another hes scared to hurt people.That line probably should of be along the lines of fear of losing control.What’s going on with Iroh and Lee is good it giving him a chance to garner prestige in the military and whenever he meets korra a solid background.My concern is how he went about earth bending and mentioning certain technology even if it’s minor.You we’re right about the neutral jing and stone carrying. I think it would have been best to either try to move the earth,focus on breathing or trying to listen to the earth when he started instead of seismic sense from the start.I get it it’s useful no denying but baby steps to giant strides would balance him out.For technology I don’t have much of an issue the atm was the only current concern mainly cause your comment about ww2 .I know it's fantasy and loosely based on the time but the atm came out roughly 30 years prior to the start of ww2 ( not a gripe on you just figured I'd mention it or it would bug me).Overall I'm interested to see where the story goes and how he intends to interact with the main cast.
I see another of your storys ended up dead, because of haters,and they trash talking,i noticed from the first day,when i started to read your FF for the first time, you already had few storys on long hiatus, and they whare not updated for long time, It is because of people trash talking them Yes.? So when they do that, you quit writing this FF for good. Ok then, i will say this, to help you, big part of being a writer is that, you must be ready for such things,if only few bad comments is enough for you to give up, it will be better for you, to just stop writing FF for good, because you have at this moment several FF you did not updated for months or even years,i can assure you, you do not bring New readers in such way, who will give your FF a chance, they will see your FF who had several long hiatus and they will just move on. I realy Hope what i just writed will help you, because it will be waste if you will quit just like that, because of few bakas, who have wayyyyy to much time, and they spend it for nothing more then spreading hate,and trash around.
Mc should attempt to create banding elements from Naruto, such as the Dust Release. Combining fire, wind, and earth. Ice Release Combining wind and water Wood Release, combining the Earth and Water natures.Storm Release combining the Lightning and Water nature,Boil Release combines water and fire, Explosion Release combines earth and lightning, Scorch Release combines fire and wind, and Magnet Release combines wind and earth.
