Comments of chapter undefined of Shadow Slave: Necrosis

Great chapter

I was thinking what his appearance would be in the 2nd nightmare and I thought about his features, I came to a brilliant conclusion in my humble opinion, starting from the 1st core: zombie - ghoul - ghast - lesser vampire ( katakan ) - vampire - higher vampire - vampire lord. zombie and ghoul feed on meat, ghast something in between can survive on blood alone, appearance is as if it had no water in it, smaller vampire - look at the witcher game ( katakan ), vampire - more human, higher vampire - red eyes but like a human (having fighting form and half form, longer claws, etc.) and a vampire lord the same as the previous one but with something that makes others want to follow him. But. but if his defect weakens and he needs blood instead of meat, boom, the second defect is SUNLIGHT, not UV or any other, only natural, and it starts with the ghast that he can withstand 4 hours without a break ah and the longer he stays in the sun, the hungrier he is because it regenerates until it finally burns. of course, he will also gain the advantages of vampires (if he is at least a smaller vampire), he can go without eating for about a week for a lower vampire, great regeneration as long as he ate enough within 3.5 days (blood = calories = mass, I hope you know what I mean, it affects appearance, yes, he was more dehydrated), he does not age, including a more seductive appearance (to make it easier to get food, but he looks like a healthy 20, maybe?), paralyzing and/or ecstatic fangs, saliva, which has a regenerating effect on people and animals, but not blood just muscles and skin. and finally at the vampire lord level he can have 12 necrotic Minions and when they are in his "soul" he can use their aspects, but as we know it will be hopeless because training will be required to use it well, and this medallion will somehow lose the example: I want to survive this night. and you know, a nightmare creature attacks him and seriously injures him, and under the influence of the medialon, he kills it but loses the medialon itself. of course, you can divide the skills when I get through 2 nightmares and he will be able to gain more from individual Minions when he makes more, up to 7, because the number of Minions may be determined by the number of cores. ah, and if he is afraid of the sun, he will be able to go to his paradise, i.e. for a long night in Antarctica, just like in the original one. will become stronger, the path to cooperation with the government is open, he can get a sun protection ring there (suggestion: protects for 4 hours, regenerates for 24 hours, a level higher because it can be a type of sunny armor - protects for 4 hours, regenerates for 12 hours - protects for 8 hours, regenerates for 8 hours - melting and it will become passive without exposure to destruction, but still max 8 hours of continuous sun and it regenerates when it is not in the sun, the previous ones activate and protect for x amount of time, evolution condition: drink the blood of 5/25/125/625 different people, at least 100 ml , I'll come up with a cool story later xD) SUNNA's possible sense that the shadows are protecting mc (because you know, sun ^^ ), and Mc's instinctive fear of Nephi (again, because you know, sun ^^ ) and if cassie sees him in a vision, he'll be a zombie among spirits and his path is rot, occasionally turning and eating. it's a long way into the future, but hey, I hope we'll get there (mainly you, because you write, I can give ideas and a general POSSIBLE direction) oh and I'd love to know what you think about these ideas.

It’s not to discredit your story, I actually like it a lot, but I noticed a few things that feel a bit uncomfortable. The most notable is that the main character seems to have a great dependence on Shapira when facing any problem, and his demeanor when she saves him is more like a child receiving help from his mother. From my personal tastes, it would be better if he showed a bit more emotional maturity when interacting with Shapira.”

Thx for the chap 🍪