Comments of chapter undefined of More than a Dragon Warrior
More than a Dragon Warrior
Emmanuel_Capricorn
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I can't believe you made them brother and sister, I love this fanfic and I have nothing against it but making them brother and sister will just ruin the future romance if you plan on adding it. Tigress is best girl in KFP world imo, and having an OC as Tai Lung's wife is just stupid. It is not my decision tho, and I truly do love this fic, have a good day author, and everyone else! Pls don't take this comment too seriously Lol
I suggest that you introduce a OC character who was Tai Lungâs follower before his imprisonment and remained loyal awaiting the day her master shall return so that she may serve him once more on his path to the apex. Possible origins: A Courtesan that Tai Lung took a fancy too in his youth and decided to purchase, A young Master he fought in the past and deemed worthy of recognition, A crazed fanatic who views Tai Lung as God, A childhood friend who helped clean the jade palace.
ooh ooh I have a few ideas; For a female lead why not a lioness make her the heir to a kingdom or something lions are traditionally related with royalty. You can get him a student as well. A polar bear from Russia, (I mean Russia is known to have the best fighters plush the biggest carnivore who are one of the few animals that actively hunt humans) Mythical creatures can be excellent opponents like guardians of temples all around the world that he defeats one by one. So many ideas. I am curious to see where you lead this as you have made the MC too strong and power scaling in this rate would make every fight boring. Either you will have to continuously have stronger opponents which will break your story or the growth rate of MC will have to stop or at the very least slow down massively. Either way, cool fic.
