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Omega_3031dPostedI thought that making Madara weak was impossible considering that his entire concept is based on him being a super genius, and I was right because this author doesn't achieve it despite nerfing him as much as he can, I honestly don't understand why he chose to Madara instead of just making an original uchiha if what he wanted was a weak MC. If you don't like a forced plot to make the MC look weak, a ridiculous money collection system, and an MC with only one neuron, then don't waste your time, this Fanfic is not for you.
- Omega_3031dReplied to PrimalWhiteStar
that's worse
"Interesting," Mousesack murmured. "This Madara Uchiha seems to be someone with exceptional abilities. I'll keep that in mind. If he's here in the Cintra forest, some rumors may arise." - Omega_3037dCommentedCh 1 The Unfamiliar Quake
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- Omega_3031mthReplied to WalAcht57
Nah, although its power to stop time is broken, the ability has many weaknesses and it itself does not have much destructive power.
S-Rank — Early Divinity (Introduction of God Concept. Strongest being can destroy a continent in one attack.) - Omega_3031mthReplied to Sultan_Yulian
No harem in dxd? something is wrong with you
Should I turn this story into a harem story? If I do, who would you prefer? - Omega_3031mthPosted
La historia en si es interesante y el como maneja las relaciones buena pero el resto de defectos me hace imposible disfrutar de la novela. El protagonista es debil y tiene daño cerebral; La historia es lenta, 85 capítulos y no hay indicio de lo que dice el título, no Sharingan y no habilidades Senju; y la escritura es mediocre, el autor tiende a repetir las cosas hasta que resulta molesto, agrega demasiado dialogo inutil y sobreexplica las cosas.
- Omega_3031mthReplied to Licorice
no
Meanwhile Futarou was rolling around on the ground with tears streaming down his face, "My dick! You squished my dick! My poor little brother! How could you!!!" Futarou kept crying - Omega_3031mthReplied to Licorice
no
Futarou just smiled and took it. "Thanks, Raiha." He then tapped her forehead with his two fingers and said, "Now don't miss me too much," before walking away and putting the lunchbox in his inventory once he stepped outside. - Omega_3031mthReplied to Kuruel
no
Futarou just smiled and took it. "Thanks, Raiha." He then tapped her forehead with his two fingers and said, "Now don't miss me too much," before walking away and putting the lunchbox in his inventory once he stepped outside. - Omega_3031mthReplied to _Nanashi_"Ah, my name is Asahain..." Her expression showed hesitation before she said quietly, "Ran from Class 1-2!" When she said her first name, her voice was so low, but when she told her class, her voice was so loud, as if she tried to hide her first name.
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they are from the same novel as the sister and the MC
"Ah, my name is Asahain..." Her expression showed hesitation before she said quietly, "Ran from Class 1-2!" When she said her first name, her voice was so low, but when she told her class, her voice was so loud, as if she tried to hide her first name. - Omega_3031mthReplied to luisferCh 44 Capitulo 44: Muerte
- Omega_3031mthReplied to Shinju_Ozigaki
no recuerdas la pelea de Naruto y Neji? El no podía diferenciar el real con el clon
"era un clon" - Omega_3031mthReplied to AlastorGF
a ver, en su defensa. Sasuke se llama como el padre del tercer Hokage y no a muchos les importa. además el nombre de Madara es relativamente desconocido para la nueva generación y los civiles, por lo que podrían concluir que algún civil por casualidad le dió el mismo nombre
Madara fue llevado al centro de la arena, el hombre de mediana edad le indico a Madara qué primero calentada ah cuerpo, le indico como hacerlo y le dio algunos consejos, Madara ya sabia sobre estas cosas, sin embargo sabia que si él mostraba habilidades de más era probable qué muchos ojos estuvieran sobre él y era algo que no quería, ser vigilado de cerca era lo peor y eso era lo que intentaría evitar. - Omega_3031mthReplied to esperomejorar
no lo es, deja de mamar
Both Daniel and Haley were silently nursing the same question in their minds: Was this a date? They both felt the dynamic between them had changed somewhat.