Kitty_Loves_Milk
You don’t need to keep repeating things over and over. For example, youve mentioned that both him and the specter gain strength when it feasts, like 4 or 5 times now. Repeating the same thing over and over just makes the story annoying to read and makes you seem lazy just trying to get more word count.
I forgot how broken this mc character is gaining powers from specter devouring and If this universe has mutants ….non mutants are gonna have more to worry about when the mc shows up 😂. Even without mutants places like oscorp with the spiders etc would be good. Loving the novel got me hooked keep up good work author and take my stones.