Comments of chapter undefined of Fighting, Honour and Valhalla || Vikings x Originals x TVD Fic
Personally don’t care about the Arthur/Druid plot at all. Wish we would just get back to Vikings plot already. It also just feels so silly that he’s going for treasure by himself, how is he gonna get away with anything substantial? He can only take what he and the girls can carry. If he got a cart or something he would be chased down. Should leave and send word to Ragnar with the ships so they can sneak in and sack it and get more than what one man can carry. Have his bonded or the princess show him a hidden way inside the castle or something.
Ragnar took a risk because the old raiding spots were bad, if his predictions came true him, his family, and his village would benefit massively. He also didn’t go alone. Thorfinn took a risk for love. Which is fair, but hes 13 and alone with no real way to get back home even if he survives and gets the battle fame. Which he would just have to tell people and hope they believe him back at home cause he has no witnesses. Not saying that you don’t need set up, I just think you have other plot lines more interesting than a heir to Arthur. Maybe later in the story I’d care, but a chosen one son from a slave that hates him does not move me at all. Especially when he still has to deal with Mikael, still has to deal with the aunt and Rebekah having the firstborn. Still have to figure out he’s a demigod and him and the mikaelson’s still have to turn. All more interesting than this Arthur set up to me. But it’s your story so write what you like
TheManUnderTheBed:It’s not a wagon. Overly dumb compared to what? You could make that argument about Ragnar. It was overly dumb of him to travel west without knowing for certain that there was land and just trusting rumours. That’s the risk you take, just like Thorfinn took by staying. Blaeja wanting to go with Thorfinn has nothing to do with romance. She is using him because she wasn’t to leave and has made a calculated risk that he is the best way to do so. Whether it’s silly or not who knows. Setting things up for future arcs is a common thing to do, which is what I’m doing with his son, so I don’t get why you’d say that it isn’t needed. Foreshadowing isn’t needed? I guess not I could always remove all build up from the story and just spring things on you guys. It’s fine to not like an arc but whether you like it or not this is an important arc in setting up the world and future adventures. It also leads Thorfinn down the path lf aquiring more knowledge and introduces another future enemy.
I've never liked stories related to children. And in principle, I don't like when the main character has children in general, especially from some wretched slave who hates you.
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Loved the chapter bro 👍 And I loved the small moment of identity crisis thorfinn was having just now, it sorta shows he’s changing in a lot of ways because he’s doing something most people from those times do, learning new ways different from their own culture and adapting to it, it seems to me that thorfinn is more trying to live up to the typical status quo for a Viking and not really trying to live in his ‘own’ way, or thinking with his own ideals, then again he’s a fourteen year old who’s never been introduced to any other ideals but his own culture so it’s to be expected Also, I know it’s unlikely but I’m hoping there’s a chance at some sort of resolution between thorfinn and Eowin and they can have a fresh start
Thanks for the chapter and I hope my ideas have helped you written in previous chapters. In the end I don't understand why become more moral, I think it would be better to be more ruthless and calculating. As a demi-god I always thought he should be superior to a peak human physically and even mentally. I hope you will make him understand that there are no wrong methods or means to achieve a goal. I hope I'm wrong but Eowyn and his son will almost certainly be his enemies.
